Monday, July 20, 2009

Assignment 1B - Me, Myself & I (Edit)

This is the edited version of Me, Myself & I assignment, where we had to design out names.

Some points raised up in the tutorial group were that:
1) The CD shape was too angular and hard to see it formed an R.
2) Several people did not know the blue line below the CD player was a curve rule.
3) The "Y" formed by the graph and the pencil was unclear.
4) It was not clear that the lines below on the bottom was supposed to be paper.

After the review from the tutorial group, I decided to change the shape of the CD player to be more circular to better illustrate the top part of "R".

Also, I changed around several of the objects on the page. Instead of a graph, I used a ruler since it is much more obvious compared to the graph used before.

I added text to help show that paper is below all the objects. Also, some people suggested that to prevent the paper from taking too much attention, I should reduce the opacity.

P.S. Do you understand the meaning of the text? XD

1 comment:

  1. The red pencil should point more towards the right. Can you further simplify the CD player?

    Regards,
    Zhixiong
    DW2 Tutor

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