Assignment 1B - Me, Myself and I (CG Edition)

This is the second part of the 1st Class Assignment. I decided to stick with the idea of showing the messy workplace to illustrate my name. We had to complete it in CG and I felt it was simple enough to create.

As stated before in my previous post, it was the 1st time using one of these programs and I think it is quite a good attempt. Here's the picture below.
After asking my friends about the picture. I decided to move the curve rule, which forms one leg of the "R" higher since they thought it looked like an "S" instead. So this is the final (As of now) picture.

I received several suggestions on how to improve which I haven't done. Hopefully will get them done by next week.

I also tried one more design, the one which has me sleeping. I changed it ALOT from the initial sketch. I really like the design but I couldn't make a decent looking blanket so I don't think it would work... It's very simple and bright. XD Haha. I don't think it would work though, it doesn't look professional enough.