1st Design
2nd DesignOkay, some of the feedback I recieved was that:
1) The real-life images contrasts too strongly with the CG background.
2) The circles don't seem to be giving the idea of connections.
3) There's too much text at the bottom so it looks cluttered.
4) The curvy lines don't seem too futuristic.
5) The white background for the logos don't fit.
6) NUS logo is too small.
As you can see, the changes are quite obvious. I used a simple black outline for the electronics that are connected and changed the lines. Also, removed several lines of text so the bottom looks clearer. I changed the NUS logo slightly, since I wasn't sure what size should I make it. I think the ratio is quite good already... If it's larger it might be too striking, especially since it has an orange background compared to the grey gradient of the background. Can anyone give me suggestions on it?
I think the 1st design this time isnt that good... I'm not really sure how I could show connections/interactivity between the objects. Also, there's alot of white space in it.
I quite like the 2nd design. Arranging the objects around, I drew the lines connecting the devices in a similiar shape and colour to the MRT map. It's subtle, but I wanted to get people to think that in the future, connecting with the internet and other devices would be as easy as taking the MRT around Singapore.
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